tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5710097126963283765.post56641325336954509..comments2023-10-11T12:17:38.054-04:00Comments on A Lil' Sumpin' Sumpin': Narrative VoiceA Lil Sumpin' Sumpin'http://www.blogger.com/profile/11188992285274244678noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5710097126963283765.post-17674892256939797252009-03-01T20:24:00.000-05:002009-03-01T20:24:00.000-05:00I like the fact that your WIP is in 3rd person and...I like the fact that your WIP is in 3rd person and I think it's working for the story so far! It's refreshing to read something in 3rd person after reading so much in 1st. I find it harder to write in that POV but it's something I would like to do at some point. Anywho, off to read your submission ;o)GMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02416137629786778346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5710097126963283765.post-91078463175048485562009-03-01T01:58:00.000-05:002009-03-01T01:58:00.000-05:00I'm writing my WIP in third person as well. Althou...I'm writing my WIP in third person as well. Although I have started writing something in first, it is a totally new story and so far I'm not sure how well i like it in first person. <BR/><BR/>I'm a big fan of the third, but as you said, if in the end it's better in first you might find the change liberating. Just ask Alex. She is changing all of her current WIP's pages to first person. about 60 pages i think. <BR/><BR/>sometimes we are too close to a piece and we might not see how it's working and not. hence workshop. I'm sure your group can help loads with the concern. <BR/><BR/>and you can always change it over and over again. until you publish. <BR/><BR/>MiaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com